paulie,
i love reading your paper
it was one of the most enjoyable i've read mainly because of the dialogue in the beginning.
throughout the paper you seem to be having a conversation with the reader rather than just writing an essay and throwing out the obvious facts. i liked that a lot..
i also think you used alot of what we've looked at in class beautifully in this paper
good job!
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